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The Unmoving Great Library by KANiCHaN The Unmoving Great Library by KANiCHaN
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Critique by Rakukomori Jul 25, 2013, 1:01:10 AM
I really enjoy the magic circle in this. It really catches your eyes when you look at it. However I feel as if the crystals are trying to grab your attention as well but end up just kind of hanging around there. The background just doesn't seem to really have much of an impact as it should. Though its a really outstanding shade of violet, it keeps to more blend with Patchouli rather than either giving her the spotlight or contribute to her position (if that makes sense. . . )

Onto Patchouli herself, I think the usage of more clothing wrinkles would do very nicely. It's give more depth and a nicer feel to it. The ruffles are very nice though, I enjoy their shape.~ (Idontevenknow). Her impression could use some improvement. I think Patchouli as a very serious person who would have a look of disdain when she's conjuring up her magic. c:

All in all, I think this is a very lovely piece~ Judging for this, I'm sure your future art will be ten times more impressive~ :3c
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kiramekiyukihito Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  New member
Asrbfhfsfsdfshtdshrthfkhh
omg
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sooo pretttyyyyy
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planxtafroggie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You draw very gorgeous skirt fluff. ^^
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mangagirl913 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
(Patchouli's theme plays) Someone's gonna get owned... Oh wait, it's me? (runs like hell) NONONONONO (pichuun)
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Hailwic Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love the way you draw your characters! They're so cute!
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IlyaEisvern Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Wow, you really got her design spot on! A lot of people forget her little bows and some parts of her gown, but you included everything! It also helps that you drew my third favorite Touhou character! XD  Well done, and you deserve *hugs*
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tophxomi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful!
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moeno Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Good job.
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Vampyre-Lover Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Nicely Done!!!
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4theradicaldreamers Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I had a critique it would be that the legs don't seem to be in the right place, they seem to be angled to much to the left or just sticking out of the dress, not sure how that fits with the pose...but the whole body may be angled a little to the right. That stuck out to me...
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4theradicaldreamers Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's amazing...especially after seeing the first one...I hope I get that much better in a year!! The textures and shading are spot on...
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