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The Unmoving Great Library by KANiCHaN The Unmoving Great Library by KANiCHaN
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Critique by Rakukomori Jul 25, 2013, 1:01:10 AM
I really enjoy the magic circle in this. It really catches your eyes when you look at it. However I feel as if the crystals are trying to grab your attention as well but end up just kind of hanging around there. The background just doesn't seem to really have much of an impact as it should. Though its a really outstanding shade of violet, it keeps to more blend with Patchouli rather than either giving her the spotlight or contribute to her position (if that makes sense. . . )

Onto Patchouli herself, I think the usage of more clothing wrinkles would do very nicely. It's give more depth and a nicer feel to it. The ruffles are very nice though, I enjoy their shape.~ (Idontevenknow). Her impression could use some improvement. I think Patchouli as a very serious person who would have a look of disdain when she's conjuring up her magic. c:

All in all, I think this is a very lovely piece~ Judging for this, I'm sure your future art will be ten times more impressive~ :3c
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kiramekiyukihito Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Asrbfhfsfsdfshtdshrthfkhh
omg
omg
sooo pretttyyyyy
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planxtafroggie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You draw very gorgeous skirt fluff. ^^
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mangagirl913 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
(Patchouli's theme plays) Someone's gonna get owned... Oh wait, it's me? (runs like hell) NONONONONO (pichuun)
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Hailwic Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love the way you draw your characters! They're so cute!
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IlyaEisvern Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Wow, you really got her design spot on! A lot of people forget her little bows and some parts of her gown, but you included everything! It also helps that you drew my third favorite Touhou character! XD  Well done, and you deserve *hugs*
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tophxomi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful!
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moeno Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Good job.
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Vampyre-Lover Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Nicely Done!!!
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4theradicaldreamers Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I had a critique it would be that the legs don't seem to be in the right place, they seem to be angled to much to the left or just sticking out of the dress, not sure how that fits with the pose...but the whole body may be angled a little to the right. That stuck out to me...
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4theradicaldreamers Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's amazing...especially after seeing the first one...I hope I get that much better in a year!! The textures and shading are spot on...
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Yuyukoblossom Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:Awesome:!
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EpicN Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Nice Work!
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electric-cloudsXIV Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aweeesomeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
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lovecookie28 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW, its so awesome! :iconmingplz:
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Krazykeiron79 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
awesome, like the colours and the spell ring around the character
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StaciNadia Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Very pretty! I love all the magical effects like the magic circles, her hair, and how her outfit flows from all the magical power!
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Kpopangel94 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
wow so pretty!
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Nagishanya Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
EPIC!!!!
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duskool Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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K-VO Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
This looks fantastic!! I can really see the improvements from your older drawings! ^q^
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Krimzoon Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
reading books never looked so epic :iconlahopplz:
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Candy-Daggers Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg fantastic job!!!

i love the coloring, the affects, and basically the whole thing!! ;u;
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Tanooki-John Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
I just love Patchouli. I would just love to snuggle her when she needed someone to hug her. (Koakuma too so she won't be left out) And I would always keep an eye around when im there too.
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tophxomi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ditto!
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roboconrobo Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great work !! :D
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chakupuchi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
She's a bit too skinny, and her legs don't match up with the rest of the body in terms of skinniness. Other than proportion, it's really good! I wish I could do digital art ;__; seeing things like this makes me sad because it makes me realize my incommpetence in technology.
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HungrySohma16 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No critique needed. Beautiful artwork here.
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ValkenhaynDornez Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's amazing.
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