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The Bright Net in the Dark Cave

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;_; I redesigned her costume before realising that her colour scheme did not suit the style at all... o<-<

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Very cool! One thing I'd comment on is her anatomy. It's hard to tell what's going on in some parts due to the silhouette of her clothes, but some parts look clear enough for me to pick out a few problems.

Her upper torso, for instance, looks very compact, with very narrow shoulders that are barely as wide as her head. Slightly big heads aren't a major problem in less "literal" styles like this, but in comparison to her long arms and legs having such narrow shoulders gives her a bit of a "fleshed-out stick figure" look.

Some things I really like: That cool spiderweb background! The shading and highlights on her hair! And her outfit design in general. It looks like something I'd enjoy wearing, if I were just a smidge more audacious in my everyday clothing.